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    영작 괜찮게 됐는지 봐주실수 있을까요?

    글쓴이 : ghwo007 날짜 : 2017-03-20 (월) 20:53 조회 : 256
    This story is about Chinese family that had poorly sad stories. Jing-Mei Woo, this story's protagonist, had twin half sisters. so although they are sisters, she know them a little. In the first of the story, she didn't understand that she is real chinese. because her nationality is China, but she lived in Unites States(California) with Caucasian friends. so she behaved the way that american usuallydid. But her mother said that once you are born Chinese, you cannot help but feel and think Chinese. After her mother’s death she went to Guangzhou with her father, Canning Woo to meet his aunt. Then she would meet her twin half sisters that she never met. On the way to Guangzhou, she imagined sisters and worried the fact which mother is dead 3 month ago. she thought saying that is cruel. so she asked Auntie Lindo write letter. When Canning Woo received letters from her twin half sisters, she gave them to Joy Luck Club’s ladies. Instead of her dead mother, they wrote letters that her mother’s going to meet them. In Ghaungzhou, Jing-Mei met great-aunt(Canning Woo’s aunt). They talked long time. Canning Woo told Jing-Mei Woo that her sister’s names are Chwun Yu, “Spring rain” and Chwun Hwa, “Spring Flower”. Her mother’s name, Suyuan means ‘Long-Cherished Wish’ After this, he told her old story that why she left her daughters. In war, she did her best for saving her daughters. But it’s not so easy. So she decided significant choice. She gave her daughters expensive things that she had. It’s because she believed they saved her daughter’s life. As a result, it save them. After she listened mother’s story, she met twin sisters. In that time, she could see the mother from the twin sisters.

    Amy Tan의 A Pair of Tickets 를 요약하는 과제인데 영작이 제대로 문법에 맞게 되었는지 봐주세요!
    요청자가 자신의 300포인트를 걸었습니다. 답변이 채택되면 150포인트를 드립니다.

    궁극의。변태 2017-03-20 (월) 20:56
    첫줄부터 스토리가 두번 들어가는게 좀..
         
           
    글쓴이 2017-03-20 (월) 21:38
    조언 감사합니다.
    donn 2017-03-21 (화) 00:16
    The film begins with June's short narrative prologue about the swan feather in the opening credits and then her farewell surprise party in San Francisco for June's upcoming reunion with her long-lost twin sisters in China. Among the guests are members of The Joy Luck Club, their daughters, other relatives, and friends. The characters narrate their journeys while they reflect upon their pasts. The Joy Luck Club was formed by four women; Lindo Jong (Tsai Chin), Ying-Ying St. Clair (France Nuyen), An-Mei Hsu (Lisa Lu), and Suyuan Woo (Kieu Chinh), in San Francisco. The members have mainly played mahjong and told each other's stories over the years. They immigrated from China, remarried, and gave birth to children in America. Suyuan's daughter June (Ming-Na Wen) replaced her in the mahjong group when Suyuan died four months before the time the film is set.  이런 문장과 비교하면서 자신만의 문장을 만드는 것은 어떻습니까?
    http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0107282/synopsis?ref_=ttpl_pl_syn
    나여니 2017-03-21 (화) 03:52
    두번째줄 knows
    여섯번째줄 the fact that
    여덜번째줄 letters about
    일곱번째줄 saying about
    열두번째줄 decided significant choice -> made a significant decision
    열세번째줄 it save -> they save
    맨끝에 expensive things가 무엇인지 처음글읽는 저로써는 궁금하네요..
         
           
    글쓴이 2017-03-21 (화) 11:58
    감사합니다 ㅎ
       

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